It stood there alone and abandoned. Dark bare trees surrounded it at every side, the branches stuck out looking like claws ready to grab you at any awaiting moment. You wanted to run, but couldn’t. Your body wasn’t functioning the way you wanted it to. Then you realized the trees were slowly creeping in on you. Surrounding you. There was no place and no one to turn to. You were alone, abandoned. Ready to accept fate on your own.
dang girl the begging is so deep man. wow but very good oh and by the way i was the first one to post a comment on it ok well buy i well see you later.
ReplyDeleteExcellent nightmarish image; your words were well-chosen. Take a second look at your final line. Does it seem too hopeful for this piece? Does it need to be darker?
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