Friday, October 15, 2010
Patriotism
In this country Patriotism is what holds us together. It’s for all those people who risk their lives on a daily basis for our country. It’s what shows our appreciation for our freedom and all of that we've worked for to get it. Patriotism is all of those little things that we do every day. Your faith and devotion to this country is patriotism. Every day the flag flapping up high in the sky obtains our dignity and pride for this country.
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Catherine this piece is awesome! You used detailed and structured sentences. This piece amplifies the voicing and really makes it understandable and clear. It was descriptive and gave examples. Nice job!
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ReplyDeleteThis is a really short response, but you made it work! Although it is really short you managed to use clear well thought out details. Nice job Cat!