Creepy story Catherine. It was well writien and kinda creeped me out! I can't wait to see what else you'll put on your blog!!!!~K8lYN
Your choice of words really set up the suspense in the beginning. Well done! For a challenge, try re-writing this story using a third-person narrative.
I really liked your story! There was lots of suspense and many adjectives and you really described all your scenes! Good Job!
Wow. That's really descirptive. It sort of scared me how that creeper entered the house. Good Story.
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Creepy story Catherine. It was well writien and kinda creeped me out! I can't wait to see what else you'll put on your blog!!!!
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Your choice of words really set up the suspense in the beginning. Well done! For a challenge, try re-writing this story using a third-person narrative.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story! There was lots of suspense and many adjectives and you really described all your scenes! Good Job!
ReplyDeleteWow. That's really descirptive. It sort of scared me how that creeper entered the house. Good Story.
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