Friday, January 29, 2010

Sacrifice

4 comments:

  1. Ahhhh Catherine it seems to me you like to write sad and creepy stories, maybe you should be a horror story writer or something like that. I liked that story alot and looking at the title of your next story it sounds pretty creepy too. You are a very talented writer Catherine keep it up!!!

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  2. Catherine that is a relly good story. It feels like I'm there in the story. When Lian stabbed herself, I thought that was very noble. Your story is kind of scary, but I love it! Good Job!!

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  3. When I read "princess," I thought for sure I was getting the dark beginning of a romance. Yet you held true to the darkness and kept it an irony.
    Your word choice is phenomenal, and your writing in the last paragraph really shows Lian's regret and pain.

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  4. Hey Cat,
    That is a really good story,I loved how in the end something totally unexpected happend. Nice Job!!!
    ~Taylor

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